This is a good list, and all of those are also applicable to what women wish. If I were writing an article from my perspective, I'd include these 10 things, PLUS 11. Expecting her to do the majority of the work around the house/with the children; and 12. Relying on her to manage the bulk of emotional labor (making shopping lists, delegating what tasks or chores need doing and who is going to do it, etc).
As your article points out, we (people) want partners who respect us, love us, and add to our lives, rather than complicate things.